My little brain, has no clue
Why do I feel, so very blue?
My little eyes, know not why,
Drops of tears roll down by.
My little heart, hurts so bad,
All along, have been so glad
My little head throbs so much,
Longing for some healing touch;
My little lips, lost their smile
Was it not my trademark style?
My little mouth, fails to laugh
For, in my life it's a gaffe.
My little mind wants to forgive, forget
There is nothing left to regret.
My little hands press together
I pray to God, free me of this tether.
This is a good one. Hope you get answers for your mysteries...:-)
ReplyDeleteThank youuuuuu. :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice one!!!
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ReplyDeleteThis is good way of expressing your feelings. Nice, poetic.
ReplyDeleteOh, it's just a poem..
ReplyDeleteSimple and beautiful ...
ReplyDeleteThis poem is sensational. Good One :-)
ReplyDeleteawwww why such a sad poem. The last time I saw you, you were laughing so loud that my son was getting alarmed ;)
ReplyDeleteLol!! I still am the same sweety. Even if you wish, I can never be otherwise :)It is just a poem ;-)
ReplyDelete@Megha Thanks
ReplyDelete@Sarbjit Thanks
Thanks, dear :)
ReplyDeletegr8 one..... keep it up!!!!!!!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Anu
ReplyDeleteMy little fingers can't wait to type "AWESOME"!!!!! :-) hehe just lovely :P
ReplyDeleteAww! Nice comment. Thanks, Rajit
ReplyDeleteDear Usha,
ReplyDeleteYour lines are very expressive...
Though your rhymes fall into place with much ease, you can say goodbye to rhyme and try free verse,where your feelings won't be bridled...
NJ
Thanks Mama. Nice to see your feedback. Got the same feedback from my friend too. Will try it in my next poem :)
ReplyDeleteWell said.During hard times, God is our ultimate savior.
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