Tuesday, August 17, 2010

My Little Mystery

My little brain, has no clue

Why do I feel, so very blue?

My little eyes, know not why,

Drops of tears roll down by.

My little heart, hurts so bad,

All along, have been so glad

My little head throbs so much,

Longing for some healing touch;

My little lips, lost their smile

Was it not my trademark style?

My little mouth, fails to laugh

For, in my life it's a gaffe.

My little mind wants to forgive, forget

There is nothing left to regret.

My little hands press together

I pray to God, free me of this tether.

20 comments:

  1. This is a good one. Hope you get answers for your mysteries...:-)

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  3. This is good way of expressing your feelings. Nice, poetic.

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  4. Simple and beautiful ...

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  5. This poem is sensational. Good One :-)

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  6. awwww why such a sad poem. The last time I saw you, you were laughing so loud that my son was getting alarmed ;)

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  7. Lol!! I still am the same sweety. Even if you wish, I can never be otherwise :)It is just a poem ;-)

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  8. gr8 one..... keep it up!!!!!!!!!! :)

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  9. My little fingers can't wait to type "AWESOME"!!!!! :-) hehe just lovely :P

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  10. Dear Usha,
    Your lines are very expressive...
    Though your rhymes fall into place with much ease, you can say goodbye to rhyme and try free verse,where your feelings won't be bridled...
    NJ

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  11. Thanks Mama. Nice to see your feedback. Got the same feedback from my friend too. Will try it in my next poem :)

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  12. Well said.During hard times, God is our ultimate savior.

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